I wake up,eat my breakfast,get dressed and get on the bus to go to work. Suddenly the bus starts to shake, I look out the window towards the sea and see 8 giant tentacles erupting from the ocean. the bus rushes away but the tentacles grab the bus, I hear innocent people screaming down on the street. I have a dog toy in my bag, I throw it into the sea. it lets go of the bus we fall about 10 meters into the sea, lucky everyone makes it out when we make it back to shore I see the monster attack the mayor's office. I run towards the monster hoping to distract it. It turns towards me looking straight in the eye, I stand there trembling scared that he would attack me. The beast wraps it’s giant tentacle around me and brings me towards his mouth, I take a growth pill that a scientist gave a few days ago. He said that it would come in handy, just before I enter his mouth I become a giant. I punched the beast in the head, the enormous creature crumbled to the ground. then I shrink back to normal size. I see the ferry at the end of the pier with the whole city onboard ready to evacuate. I rushed to the end of the pier, got on the ferry and we were off. I see the city crumble under the ocean bringing the enormous creature down with it where do we go now...
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Tuesday, April 28, 2020
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Hi Archie,
ReplyDeleteWow! An exciting story...I wonder what will happen next. Is it a story you might continue? You used some fabulous phrases like 'giant tentacles erupting from the ocean' and 'enormous creature crumbled to the ground'. They really gave me an image in my mind while I was reading. Keep up the creative work!