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Wednesday, July 1, 2020

The visitors

1-7-2020


It was the middle of the night when they came.


A typical autumn evening, there was a scattering of fallen, auburn leaves on the highway. Light leaked from a flickering street lamp, which buzzed faintly as the light bulb struggled.


The wind moaned quietly, and the leaves crackled as they rose and fell, dancing as if controlled by an unseen puppet master.


A humming noise was the first sign of their arrival. In the distance at first, then filling the street as it came closer. It hovered several feet from the road, tilting slightly from side to side as if surveying the land around.


A little girl gasped as she watched from her bedroom window. Then 10 green aliens emerged from the giant spaceship with giant machine guns and started blowing up innocent people and ancient buildings... 


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Archie
    This story is amazing
    It is really descriptive and detailed
    I wish that you had added more to your story as I want to keep reading it
    Keep up the good work

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