5/5/2020
The driver glared at the sight in front of him. He simply couldn’t believe his eyes!
The blizzard continued to swirl all around them, making it even more difficult to steer.
He knew he had to act quickly, or else it would be too late.The distracting whirling and
clanking of machinery all around him didn’t help to settle his nerves, but he knew he had
to wrestle control of his emotions: his next move was to be a defining one. He decided to
jump out of his plane hoping to dodge the blizzard he fell face first into the snow where to
from here...
The blizzard continued to swirl all around them, making it even more difficult to steer.
He knew he had to act quickly, or else it would be too late.The distracting whirling and
clanking of machinery all around him didn’t help to settle his nerves, but he knew he had
to wrestle control of his emotions: his next move was to be a defining one. He decided to
jump out of his plane hoping to dodge the blizzard he fell face first into the snow where to
from here...
Archie. This is amazing! Your writing is very descriptive and detailed. I don't believe that a young person is writing these words. Very deep. I love it. However would love to see you write a complete piece of work. You keep leaving us hanging with no clear finish, which I love but to challenge your creativity try finish it off.
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