6/5/2020
On the surface, everything looked ordinary.The boy in the boat was bored.
He had lived beside this boring river with his boring family for his whole boring life.
Nothing unexpected ever seemed to happen to him. He often went to bed at night and
wished for something exciting in his life. He woke up the next morning to go out and row his
boat on the river. As he rowed down the river the water started to form a whirlpool around him.
He screamed for help but he was too far away for anyone to hear him. As the whirlpool sucked
him under he saw a giant wooden town at the bottom of the river. He remembered an old
villager told him a legend that a town used to sit right where his town is now thousand of years
ago, turns out the old man was right he thought to himself...
He had lived beside this boring river with his boring family for his whole boring life.
Nothing unexpected ever seemed to happen to him. He often went to bed at night and
wished for something exciting in his life. He woke up the next morning to go out and row his
boat on the river. As he rowed down the river the water started to form a whirlpool around him.
He screamed for help but he was too far away for anyone to hear him. As the whirlpool sucked
him under he saw a giant wooden town at the bottom of the river. He remembered an old
villager told him a legend that a town used to sit right where his town is now thousand of years
ago, turns out the old man was right he thought to himself...
Hi Archie,
ReplyDeleteYou are really good at keeping me interested in your writing. I keep wanting to read more. Keep up all your good work :)